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andycastaneda
Raised in the independent art community online and off, I love art and the artists who create it.
My medium is game programming, but my games aren't quite ready for NG...

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Is this any good?

Posted by andycastaneda - July 24th, 2010


Filled up with a sensation
One impossible to tell

It's neither happy nor anxious
Feeling of not being well

Earth has not something to compare
This feeling is much for anyone to bare

This is not good
This is bad

I have become smitten
And now I'm glad

You are the one for I've fallen
You with your mind and spirit

The word not spoken
I need not hear it

'okay' is what I saw
I could only stare in awe


Comments

Well I like it. It's clever and i'm always a fan of rhyming poems!